Category Archives: Jargon

99% right

The 99% name is a memorable counterblast to contemporary scaremongering and crippling community anxiety around young people.

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Plain wrong

Hasn’t business life come to something when so many organisations feel the need to outsource the judgement of communications quality and integrity?

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One from the archive — Balls™

If you set out to celebrate engineering you must ensure your copy is brilliantly engineered. The ideas must make sense. The thoughts must connect. The jargon should lead to illumination, not frustration. The benefits should flow from the conversation, not remain obscured by self-satisfied technical babble.

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Writing wrongs

Denouncing gobbledygook generates headlines and can be claimed as an ‘initiative’, but it requires more than words to solve a problem with words.

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